Post by Yoona Im on Dec 22, 2011 22:03:20 GMT -5
Hello Final 12!!!
Tonight, one more girl will be sent home. And we have new teams this week.
First Team Beautiqe (Amber, Jessica, Kate, Natalie, Olivia & Rihanna)
Émilie: It's very underwealming, I mean, true, this could be used as an ad for Earth Day, but there is no pizazz! From what I can see, your face looks beautiful, but your pose makes you look really short, and it also looks like your leg has been amputated. It's not really what I envision when I see Earth Day.
Amanda:
I see this as a Facebook pic
One you took on a long trip
It's really boring, and it isn't model
The pose is poor, the hair nonexistent
It's too unnatural for Earth Day
Nothing going strong, nothing new, but -
You're The Thinker, just thinking
I can't tell - are your eyes blinking?
Yoona: I like this actually but I want to see more fashion value in this photo. I think a couture on you would look great here.
Alex: It's so small... i wish i could see more of it. I wish you were more involved with the dirt aspect... I just don't like it that much because i want to see more of you.
Emma: Alex wants her to be a dirty girl!
I think the pose is good, if a tad awkward, and I really like the setting here. It's a good shot and very natural and earthy, so I think you definitely nailed the theme, and the natural beauty angle is definitely a good way of tying into it. Good work!
Émilie: Salut, Model Jessica.
Comment ça va?
I can't get over how long those legs are! They gotta be fake, right?!
Loving the Christmas outfit, and you look like an expensive porcelain doll. Great job.
Amanda:
What are those things on your legs?
Is today national ugly sweater day?
What's up with the quizzical look?
Why are you whiter than the backdrop?
I have questions, it's answers I need
This is at best okay, to recede
Yoona: I really love this, Jessica. I see a model here. Not just a celebrity. I think you just make the Christmas fashionable. What a twist. I love this so much. Your best photo from this cycle
Alex: I think it's very plain but I'm loving the christmas look of it. I totally see Christmas in this photo.
Emma: I really like the styling of this photo. It's very Christmassy, but not in a kitschy way, and the facial expression and pose are very strong. Nice work!
Amanda:
The quality is awful, the face is weak
Easter it is, yes, but that's all to it
All you have going for you, nothing more
And what are those around your feet?
Your sweater isn't trendy, isn't fashionable
The lighting is blurry, the hair strange
There's not much to like, just the bunny
If you're towards the bottom, it's not funny
Émilie: Salut Plain Jane, comment ça va?
I see the celebration of Spring in your picture. The field, the bright colours, the cute bunny, but there is no energy. I want to see energy. Spring and Easter are meant to be about life, but this is just dead.
Alex: I really like it. Not only does the bunny add to Easter but the coloring of your sweater does as well. You look so young in the photo.
Yoona: I'm going to side with Alex. Overall, I love the fact that everything blend in together perfectly well. From the styling to the setting. But I do agree with Emilie too, More Energy
Emma: I think that this nails the theme expertly, but in terms of being a strong photo of you specifically it kind of misses the mark. Still, there are a lot of positives to this photo, so it's a job well done in my book.
Amanda:
Oh Natalie, you love to be original
That's the spunk why I picked you
That's why you're here, it defines
A creative shot, a creative holiday
And you're right - endorse reading
Get kids enriched before parents are suing
Get them thinking, get them doing
It's almost a lost art, but you stop it
Here, you're gorgeous as always
The lighting a bit of a problem
Despite you being the librarian
You're still the best one there is
A serious, yet pretty, yet studious look
Should get kids to open a book
Émilie: Great job here Natalie. It's a very original "holiday", and the meaning is there. Everybody should do a bit more reading and writing. I love the shadows on your face, but you look almost asleep. I'd love to see a better quality version of this picture.
Yoona: I love the holiday that you picked. I'm a book lover, and I can relate to your photo well. There's a fashion value in it. But not so much. You need to inject more attitude too.
Alex: This is something new and different and i like it.I just don't like your shirt but thats not the focus so don't worry.
Emma: I'm somewhat ambivalent on this. I do like that you took a risk and went with a lesser-known holiday, and you provided a dynamite explanation for it, so that's wonderful all the way round. I'm not a huge fan of your facial expression, though, and the outfit looks like it wants to be retro but hasn't really made up its mind about it. But I like the pose, so overall it's quite good.
Émilie: I am not entirely sure this is the best quality image you have... You look kinda pixelated, and it's a bit distracting.
It's a very interesting shot, and you have a very interesting costume, and I am loving the intensity in your eyes! However, I keep staring at your chakram, and, though it fits in well with your photo, takes the focus away from you.
Amanda:
Y0U @r3 CYB0RG N0W, 1 533
V3RY D1FF3R3N7 C0STUM3 H3R3
TH3 P1X3L@710N W0RKS, 17 D035
Screw the 1337, it's too hard to read
Just like I see the disc before you
Your eyes are strong, but that hair
You keep changing it, is that fair?
Yoona: I'm not a fan of this, Olivia. I don't really think it fits the Halloween well. I see more action than scary. But your face is fierce!!!
Alex: Halloween isnt always about scary, if it was i'd hate the holiday. I like how you took modeling and everything else and used it putting it to this photoshoot.
Emma: I definitely see the Halloween aspect of this, but the image quality is pretty lousy, and that detracts from the image as a whole. I think the facial expression is fierce, and the pose is very dominant, and overall it's pretty good.
Émilie: WOOOO! This is amazing! You've rocked this shoot from head to toe! Love love love love love!
Amanda:
I don't see Halloween at all
This is too true to you
It's not a costume, it's a custom
This is still fierce, this is still great
But it's weak with the theme -
No other flaws, but that one I ream
Yoona: I got the Halloween vibe. I think, you look very disturbed and I love it, RiRi. It's sexy, moody and fierce!!!
Alex: The third Halloween one i've seen.. it's getting a bit old but i absolutely love this photo. The best halloween one yet. I will say i love but also hate the one eye... it adds to the picture but it also looks very odd.
Emma: It's the Rihanna Horror Picture Show!
Seriously, though, this is quite good, and I think you nailed the theme completely. I don't really have much else in the way of critique except to say that you should be careful not to get too trashy with your posing and outfits, because this is seriously treading that line. But it's still awesome, so nice work!
Tonight, one more girl will be sent home. And we have new teams this week.
First Team Beautiqe (Amber, Jessica, Kate, Natalie, Olivia & Rihanna)
Émilie: It's very underwealming, I mean, true, this could be used as an ad for Earth Day, but there is no pizazz! From what I can see, your face looks beautiful, but your pose makes you look really short, and it also looks like your leg has been amputated. It's not really what I envision when I see Earth Day.
Amanda:
I see this as a Facebook pic
One you took on a long trip
It's really boring, and it isn't model
The pose is poor, the hair nonexistent
It's too unnatural for Earth Day
Nothing going strong, nothing new, but -
You're The Thinker, just thinking
I can't tell - are your eyes blinking?
Yoona: I like this actually but I want to see more fashion value in this photo. I think a couture on you would look great here.
Alex: It's so small... i wish i could see more of it. I wish you were more involved with the dirt aspect... I just don't like it that much because i want to see more of you.
Emma: Alex wants her to be a dirty girl!
I think the pose is good, if a tad awkward, and I really like the setting here. It's a good shot and very natural and earthy, so I think you definitely nailed the theme, and the natural beauty angle is definitely a good way of tying into it. Good work!
Émilie: Salut, Model Jessica.
Comment ça va?
I can't get over how long those legs are! They gotta be fake, right?!
Loving the Christmas outfit, and you look like an expensive porcelain doll. Great job.
Amanda:
What are those things on your legs?
Is today national ugly sweater day?
What's up with the quizzical look?
Why are you whiter than the backdrop?
I have questions, it's answers I need
This is at best okay, to recede
Yoona: I really love this, Jessica. I see a model here. Not just a celebrity. I think you just make the Christmas fashionable. What a twist. I love this so much. Your best photo from this cycle
Alex: I think it's very plain but I'm loving the christmas look of it. I totally see Christmas in this photo.
Emma: I really like the styling of this photo. It's very Christmassy, but not in a kitschy way, and the facial expression and pose are very strong. Nice work!
Amanda:
The quality is awful, the face is weak
Easter it is, yes, but that's all to it
All you have going for you, nothing more
And what are those around your feet?
Your sweater isn't trendy, isn't fashionable
The lighting is blurry, the hair strange
There's not much to like, just the bunny
If you're towards the bottom, it's not funny
Émilie: Salut Plain Jane, comment ça va?
I see the celebration of Spring in your picture. The field, the bright colours, the cute bunny, but there is no energy. I want to see energy. Spring and Easter are meant to be about life, but this is just dead.
Alex: I really like it. Not only does the bunny add to Easter but the coloring of your sweater does as well. You look so young in the photo.
Yoona: I'm going to side with Alex. Overall, I love the fact that everything blend in together perfectly well. From the styling to the setting. But I do agree with Emilie too, More Energy
Emma: I think that this nails the theme expertly, but in terms of being a strong photo of you specifically it kind of misses the mark. Still, there are a lot of positives to this photo, so it's a job well done in my book.
Amanda:
Oh Natalie, you love to be original
That's the spunk why I picked you
That's why you're here, it defines
A creative shot, a creative holiday
And you're right - endorse reading
Get kids enriched before parents are suing
Get them thinking, get them doing
It's almost a lost art, but you stop it
Here, you're gorgeous as always
The lighting a bit of a problem
Despite you being the librarian
You're still the best one there is
A serious, yet pretty, yet studious look
Should get kids to open a book
Émilie: Great job here Natalie. It's a very original "holiday", and the meaning is there. Everybody should do a bit more reading and writing. I love the shadows on your face, but you look almost asleep. I'd love to see a better quality version of this picture.
Yoona: I love the holiday that you picked. I'm a book lover, and I can relate to your photo well. There's a fashion value in it. But not so much. You need to inject more attitude too.
Alex: This is something new and different and i like it.I just don't like your shirt but thats not the focus so don't worry.
Emma: I'm somewhat ambivalent on this. I do like that you took a risk and went with a lesser-known holiday, and you provided a dynamite explanation for it, so that's wonderful all the way round. I'm not a huge fan of your facial expression, though, and the outfit looks like it wants to be retro but hasn't really made up its mind about it. But I like the pose, so overall it's quite good.
Émilie: I am not entirely sure this is the best quality image you have... You look kinda pixelated, and it's a bit distracting.
It's a very interesting shot, and you have a very interesting costume, and I am loving the intensity in your eyes! However, I keep staring at your chakram, and, though it fits in well with your photo, takes the focus away from you.
Amanda:
Y0U @r3 CYB0RG N0W, 1 533
V3RY D1FF3R3N7 C0STUM3 H3R3
TH3 P1X3L@710N W0RKS, 17 D035
Screw the 1337, it's too hard to read
Just like I see the disc before you
Your eyes are strong, but that hair
You keep changing it, is that fair?
Yoona: I'm not a fan of this, Olivia. I don't really think it fits the Halloween well. I see more action than scary. But your face is fierce!!!
Alex: Halloween isnt always about scary, if it was i'd hate the holiday. I like how you took modeling and everything else and used it putting it to this photoshoot.
Emma: I definitely see the Halloween aspect of this, but the image quality is pretty lousy, and that detracts from the image as a whole. I think the facial expression is fierce, and the pose is very dominant, and overall it's pretty good.
Émilie: WOOOO! This is amazing! You've rocked this shoot from head to toe! Love love love love love!
Amanda:
I don't see Halloween at all
This is too true to you
It's not a costume, it's a custom
This is still fierce, this is still great
But it's weak with the theme -
No other flaws, but that one I ream
Yoona: I got the Halloween vibe. I think, you look very disturbed and I love it, RiRi. It's sexy, moody and fierce!!!
Alex: The third Halloween one i've seen.. it's getting a bit old but i absolutely love this photo. The best halloween one yet. I will say i love but also hate the one eye... it adds to the picture but it also looks very odd.
Emma: It's the Rihanna Horror Picture Show!
Seriously, though, this is quite good, and I think you nailed the theme completely. I don't really have much else in the way of critique except to say that you should be careful not to get too trashy with your posing and outfits, because this is seriously treading that line. But it's still awesome, so nice work!
